I am chained
blablabla
in this beautiful world
blablabla
I wanna walk around
blablabla
see the sun
blablabla
see it shine
on your face
on her face
in this beautiful world
I wanna shut my eyes
cover my ears
feel the beauty
touch it with reality
but I walk around
blablabla
still in chains
as I wince in pain
I wince in pain
wince in pain
in this beautiful world..
2 comments:
Quite poignant i must say. I'am very much touched. Yet you should opt for more purpose in your writing, a distinctive direction, which many poets seldom achive. The theme and style is hardly unique, but the idea is one of a kind. Mandazi, Your Brother.
Mandazi yo face :D
Thank you for your valuable opinion. I will keep it in mind, and I always welcome criticism :p maybe I can learn from you.
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